Seems a little chilly
Great energy and beat on this one. Kind of brings to mind a snowball fight or sled race. Not loud enough to be dance, but feels sort of techno. It's an interesting atmosphere you've generated.
I'm noticing that the main melody line is clashing with the harmony in some places, making it sound weird and discordant. That's OK if that's what you were aiming for, but just not what I prefer. Also could do with the addition of a few more harmony parts in some places... There's always room for more harmony.
Good job, keep at it!
M3 of the Review Request Club