MeteorManMike's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[NikM - CrystalCloud]

Seems a little chilly

Great energy and beat on this one. Kind of brings to mind a snowball fight or sled race. Not loud enough to be dance, but feels sort of techno. It's an interesting atmosphere you've generated.

I'm noticing that the main melody line is clashing with the harmony in some places, making it sound weird and discordant. That's OK if that's what you were aiming for, but just not what I prefer. Also could do with the addition of a few more harmony parts in some places... There's always room for more harmony.

Good job, keep at it!

M3 of the Review Request Club

lxNikMxl responds:

I've been working on creating a nice balance between a unique style (which may be that clashing/distorted sound you hear O.o) and a nice atmosphere. I was hoping to find a good amount of critique on those two things in these reviews and it seems you just gave that to me. I'm about to start on a new piece to try and get rid of this writer's block I've been having, and just because you requested it, I'm gonna try to create a dance song with TONS of harmony. Thank you for the review and look for my new track that I should put up soon with all the harmony!

- NikM

[~SW~ Alone]

After the end

Sounds like a post-apocalyptic theme, maybe 10 or 100 years after it happened. It does give a sensation of loneliness and solitude. 'Ancient, lifeless structures tower towards the sky as clouds of dust drift by their feet. All is silent as the grave as you walk through this scene, wondering what could have happened.'

Really great work on the piano, just the right amount of reverb and volume to make it feel lifeless, yet like there was once life. The supporting string chords are also well done. This is a very emotional piece, and works really well.

Great job, keep up the good work!

M3 of the Review Request Club

[The Corridors of Time]

Yay, Chrono Trigger!

Just recently discovered this game, and loved it. This was one of my favorite tracks. Very well done with the vocals, one of the rare pieces that has good vocals. I think it's interesting how you gave this kind of a Spanish feel with the guitar and maracas.

Seems a little empty, like there could be a long bass (strings, synth, etc) at places to keep up the atmosphere of magic and mystery. This is kind of a step away from that and one towards kind of a cheerful, dancing feel.

Overall, good job. Keep it up!

M3 of the Review Request Club

Twone responds:

Although it wasn't my goal to do so, people seem to appreciate the Latin feel. Thanks a lot!

[Stargenx - Monolith]

Majestic

Finally! An awesome classical piece to review. Right from the start, I loved the gradual crescendo. Really builds up well to something amazing. You have all the right harmony parts and instrument samples. Masterfully done.

My only problem with this one is that it isn't any longer. I could do with another minute of epic, i think. :)

Can we get everyone to improve this guy's score? This absolutely does not deserve a 1.33. 5'd and fav'd.

M3 of the Review Request Club

Stargenx responds:

Thanks for the review! I usually try and keep songs concise so as not to lose the feeling and message to boredom. Thanks a lot for the score improvements! Makes me feel good. :)

[Animal Forest [EP]]

Very surreal

This piece is extremely... weird. I think it's safe to say that you can definitely call this one ART (all caps, of course). Near the beginning, it sounds like a broken game disk, with sounds just randomly playing. Really glitchy and strange.

I suppose this is supposed to convey the possibilities of a single resource. You've taken the samples from this one series and done just about everything possible with it. It doesn't sound like any one particular genre or song, just throwing whatever you could think of at it.

I can see that this absolutely took a lot of time and effort to make. It's just... bizarre. Not like anything I've heard. Good job, I think?

M3 of the Review Request Club

[J@Ks Zoom Guitar Jam 4]

Not my favorite

Really don't know what to think about this one. I like my audio to have some sort of rhythm, melody and structure. But this seems to be just a mass of chaotic noise. I understand it takes some considerable talent to produce said noise, and I think it would be better placed in making an actual song. Of course, this coming from a guy who's never picked up a guitar in his life, and has no idea what to do with one.

Melody, rhythm, harmony. Keep these in mind for your next submission. You could probably make a decent song with the elements you've presented here.

M3 of the Review Request Club

gamejunkie responds:

Thanks for the review, much appreciated. And I understand totally what your saying, but keep in mind, this was just an impromptu picking up of the guitar and letting it wail. It's basically 64 seconds of freestyle. Was trying to play something with a little bit of a Hendrix feel to it, that's all.

Cheers gamejunkie.

[-)S(- Celestial Midway]

Happy dance

Sounds quite cheerful and energetic, I could totally rave to this. The use of whatever that synth you're using is spot on, it works really awesome for harmonizing and chromatics. I could see this as being BGM for some sort of platformer or racing game.

I'm noticing that the kick drums are a little prominent, they kind of drown out the rest of the parts. However, I've noticed this on any number of dance/techno pieces, so I guess that's fine as is. Also feels kind of empty at points, like there could be more parts in it.

I guess that's it. Great job, and keep it up!

M3 of the Review Request Club

[Tales of Heroism]

Wow.

This is seriously awesome. Worthy of a movie soundtrack. Might I ask how you came across those brass samples? I am in desperate need of a good low brass instrument, and what you're using is absolutely perfect.

5 and faved

-M3

DarkantheHero responds:

Thank you. The brass is from East West Quantum Leap Symphonic Orchestra. I think they might have some brass only software, I know I need to get Hollywood Strings for sure though.

[Hovering Fantasy]

Exciting, then calm down

Your synth gives it a really nice, frantic feel, leading into the slower, more mystical section. I like how the chords keep the mood strong near the beginning, then during the slower section become more like some old game prologue. Great work.

A good solid drumline, at least near the beginning and end, would very much enhance the awesomeness. Regardless, you managed to get my head bouncing with this.

Awesome work, keep it up!

M3 of the Review Request Club

ErlendHL responds:

Thanks! =D Yeah good idea with some drums, didn't think about that :P

[Eternal Escape]

Run, they're coming!

Sounds kind of like some sort of chase scene in a game. The drums do indeed create action. It sounds like this one was well thought out. If you're having trouble with a long pause because of a sample, just select 'cut remainder' when rendering to audio file.

I agree with SCTE3, this does sound shallow. This piece has so much potential to be even more awesome. What I'd suggest is to add some supporting harmony parts. Help to fill in the gaps where no particular melody instrument is playing.

Good job, keep working at it!

M3 of the Review Request Club

ErlendHL responds:

Thanks, this really helped!
Edit: uh how can you agree with SCTE3? He posted after you... or is it possible to edit reviews?