Voices are a bit painful
The band is pretty good, I like your drums and guitar, especially the riff at 2:45. The main melody is good, could use a few more parts. Of course, if this was a live performance you'd be limited by the number of members.
No offense, but the singing is kind of weak, often out of key at times. Lyrics don't make much sense either, that might just be me :P
I'm curious about the title, not quite sure how it relates to the piece.
Decent job, just work on the singing a little :)
8/10 4/5